Sunset in Sanjhih, Taiwan
Dresses in white,
Flowers, the like.
Parties and favors,
Tokens to savor.
Girls and dreams,
Valentine’s scenes.
Weddings and wishes,
Tickles and kisses.
Strange girl, strange dream,
Off of on her own, alone in her stream.
She doesn’t want much,
No flowers and such.
Give her the land,
Give her her hand.
Let her write,
Let her fight.
Let her be,
Oh, memory.
Let her look,
Let her wait.
Let her, seeking, find her fate.
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shift 
How profound. You have the gift. Use it and give us the pleasure of reading your words.
Thank you, Terri. I was meant for this.
lovely and pure
thank you.
That was satisfying. It read very well.
Thank you! I’ve really never been much of a poet, but sometimes taking a shot at it is worthwhile.
Stunning!
Thank you.
I love this.
Thank you! I do, too.
I just started writing poetry, and I´m no good at it. I think I follow about 8 poets, try to learn a little more from them. I like the theme `let her´ short and to the point with very cool rhythm if your read it out loud, plus nice word put together. Quite a beauty.
Thank you, Charly. Yeah, for me poetry is all about the rhythm. I definitely think it helps when I read the poem out loud. I won’t say I think I’m good at poetry either, though. Everything I do, I feel, is a work in progress.
Thanks so much for reading and commenting!
My pleasure.